The core of your writing whilst sounding reasonable originally, did not settle very well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but only for a short while. I still have a problem with your leaps in logic and one might do well to help fill in all those breaks. When you can accomplish that, I could surely be fascinated.
The core of your writing whilst sounding reasonable originally, did not settle very well with me personally after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but only for a short while. I still have a problem with your leaps in logic and one might do well to help fill in all those breaks. When you can accomplish that, I could surely be fascinated.